Talk:If Summer Only Lasted One Day

In your "Author's Comments" section you were saying that you thought the arcticle was sort of a step back for you, because you focused too much on the Phinbella relationship, so I recomend you add descriptions of the other charecter's adventure. In my writting (outside the fanon) I've often noted how to make a story more widened, you have to write the boring inbetween parts. I know tha it's a pain in the butt, and you often have to fight with it, but it works well in the end, other than that, it rocked! The passion of Star Trek, with kids our age! Yay!AlexCat (talk) 05:38, January 16, 2012 (UTC)