User blog comment:The Regurgitator/I'm hopping the bandwagon, come on kids!/@comment-5137023-20110531230935/@comment-2010808-20110531231906

Okay i have read it. Imma break it down

Charectors: This does seem plausible, it;s a non canon ship, with a fireside girl, which takes off a point. and they do act in charector, with what they do anyway.

Plot: It's semi interesting, with the love parts, and the ship itself is done ok, though i do not support, and the diary thing is nice.

Final thoughts: A nice, decent story, while not great, it doesn't hurt to read it

Grade: B+