User blog comment:J. Severe/Comments for "The Truth about Ferb Fletcher!"/@comment-5151799-20110814223708

I need to do more work on this. :/

First things first, I'm thinking of rewriting two parts to make them better. Those two parts would be the part when the Queen faints, and the part where Santego invades the anointation (or whatever it is) and what immediately follows. Mostly because those scenes... well, they look silly when I look at them now. I could've done so much more with them. Particularly the latter scene. Therefore... well, I'm rewriting them. Duh.

Second: pictures. I need to draw some pics for this story. The old poster-like one I made, that can be seen on my user page, won't cut it. I need to draw a logo, a new poster, and, obviously, some drawings of scenes from the story itself. Not sure when I'll be able to do it, I may have to get a new sketchbook, but it MUST be done. Eet must.

So, uh... Yeah. Just sayin'. JS is out.