User blog:Tiberius64/Dialogue...

This will be short and sweet. This is more of a poll, actually. If any of you have read my FanFiction.net versions of the stories, you'll notive that that's where the actual dialogue is, and that this site is only where I post the descriptions of the events with some quotes from the stories.

Anyways, I wanted to know if you think the dialogue between characters is too sterile, shallow, mechanical, quirky, out-of-character, or just outright stupid in any of the original FanFiction.net versions of my stories. I've become more conscious about the true depth of my stories and feel that a lot of that depends greatly on how the characters talk.

'''IN SHORT, FEEDBACK APPRECIATED !!! THANKS AND GOD BLESS!!!'''