Talk:Alan Marshall

Only thing I need to point out is Cadence is 15 year's old and your OC is 21 so sorry but it's kind of creepy that he flirted with an underage girl I mean he could of not know about her age, or this could take place in the future, or he only meant it playfully anyway also just an idea but maybe you could age his age down to 19/18/17?-Joy