User blog comment:PlantyThePottedPlant/Random Topic Blogging II: Electric Blogaloo/@comment-3006892-20120714201157/@comment-4123215-20120715010330

I read it just then, and it is... umm.... WEAK. It was HORRIBLE, and not in a gruesome way, it was just bad. I guess the characters seemed similar to what they'd act like in the show, but besides that, it has no tension, no scares, just gore, and frankly, it's not even good GORE! If your gore-a-phobic story is not gonna be scary, at least make it entertaining in SOME way, but nope, just "Rainbow Dash passes out, and then she wakes up, and then she passes out, and then she wakes up, and then she dies, THE END."

Look, I'm sure some people would like this type of story, but I cannot stand 80% of a story being just a pony dying. It's just a bad story, and besides the characters, like I said, actually staying IN character like the show, it's just pretenious gore. 3/10.