User blog comment:Raging Blast/Story Reviews/@comment-64.92.43.111-20110626162417/@comment-1821137-20110627033928

I don't want to say your teacher is wrong, at all. You may be talented, I am not there to decide. I agree with your point that I'm very critical, but that is because I'm not scared to point out the flaws of one thing, in real life too. Even so, I wasn't really a lot critical when I reviewed these stories, except a few.