User blog comment:Kittyfire/Random Topic Blogging!/@comment-3006892-20111226054409/@comment-4037231-20111226223412

Well, to put it short, i think it's a cool twist on a very familiar plot, though it did quickly becoming more like that plot and less...twisty. but that's not bad, that's still good for the story. yes, the logic that starts it all is flawed, as i said before, which stops it from being great, but it's still quite good

also, in irc, you built up the stacy part....but we never see Alt. reality stacy and how messed up she must be, seems odd...unless it's so bad you can't show it. in that case. i see.

enough joking, i like this, and jessie's part....yeah it made go "holy *BLEEP*.

so...i'll give it an B+