User blog comment:Raging Blast/Story Reviews/@comment-1821137-20110630141705/@comment-1821137-20110702163036

Uh, well, I don't really understand what do you want to say by "Old Style Writing", however, even with it, the flaws are existent xD

Also, even with Santego having minions, well, England has a pretty advanced military. In one episode, PnF even visit England, at it is not ruled by anyone really...

And with the Solar thing, Phin said something like "Isn't that the energy from the sun that makes things work?" or something similar. I think Phin'd have advanced knowledge over Solar Energy, while "Isn't that" shows a bit of uncertainty.

And yeah, your story is pretty good :)