User blog:NotAGothChick101/Ugh

Revenge of the Phineas is coming along well, but there are problems with it.

For example, Ferb has too many lines. However, I don't think this can be avoided.

Also, I feel like the writing is kinda cheesy at times.

And I'm not sure I'm keeping the characters very in-character.

Any advice or suggestions?

So you've discovered your pet is a secret age--  I don't want your pamphlet!  21:39, June 7, 2011 (UTC)