User blog comment:PlantyThePottedPlant/Random Topic Blogging II: Electric Blogaloo/@comment-3006892-20120714201157/@comment-4123215-20120715015618

I think it was only clever ONCE, where Pinkie said she was doing this for a while, that was actually kinda clever, but if most of the story is just about a captive and her kidnapper, it should reveal more interesting things about the characters, be more disturbingly written, and if you're gonna make Pinkie the villian, give her a little bit more development. I get it, she's insane, but she enjoys it, alright, but is there any reason she's insane, or why she likes slowly killing her victims? You'd think with all the things Pinkie told Rainbow Dash, these things would be one of them, or Rainbow would have asked them. I read a lot of scary stories involving characters from a show, some of them work, most don't. A few examples are Squidward's Suicide, Dead Bart, to name a few. These stories use the gore to their advantage, as well as building suspense. After reading those stories, you expect me to be scared by... THIS? That's an insult to my 13 year old brain. So yes Fossy, I see what you mean COMPLETLY. The story is bland and forgettable... As gore stories go.