User blog comment:Kaky k 64/Mary Sue/@comment-1647442-20110325022649/@comment-3039505-20110326212442

This is what I got for Alice Flynn Shapiro (the original one)
 * Alice Flynn-Shapiro isn't a character: she's you, or you as you'd like to be. She may be popular, or she may not, but no matter what she's impossible to ignore; she stands out... just the way you always wanted to. She always knew she was special, destined for great things - and probablyf made sure everyone else knew it too. She's come in for her share of hurt, but gotten off with minor damage. And you, her creator, have spoilt her rotten and given her everything she wanted.

You identify far too heavily with Alice Flynn-Shapiro, and defend her from all sides, never realizing that in your quest to make her perfect you are alienating your readers. Back off and take a break. Try writing the story from the viewpoint of a different character, one you have less sympathy with... or writing a different story and coming back to this one.
 * 95!