User blog comment:Raging Blast/Story Reviews/@comment-3319309-20110629162608/@comment-1821137-20110629174245

Yeah, well, there were some grammar and spelling mistakes. And Goth, I know that. The fact that Ferb died didn't really make me give the story a lower rating. It's just that the murder happened to sudden, and in a... well... awkward way.

Anyway, I'm waiting to see the revwrited chapters :)