User blog comment:Kuzlalala/Is Your Character a Mary Sue or Marty Stu?/@comment-3251190-20111002014220/@comment-753210-20111002014540

After I read her article, she appears to be too bossy and a control freak. She also seems like she hates everyone. Maybe you should give her more talents other than cooking and maybe give her some soft spots for people, or maybe at least one, good, mutual relationship with a character..