User blog comment:NotAGothChick101/200 Story Challenge by Goth/@comment-3473686-20111204200618/@comment-3394114-20111205190343

Really? Still, the name "Aniket" sounds awfully familiar, but I can't remember why. My thoughts? Well, beware of mingled non-sense, but here's the paragraph(it's at 3rd person, I'm not good at 1st person): '''Desperation. No more air. That was what Phineas felt when Heinz was strangling him.''' '''A choice. That was what Candace had to do. Her brother or her Master. One of the people she loved the most, or the man who accorded her a chance to a new life. Frustration. Her heart was screaming for Phineas, but her brain was trying to drown the impulse. She couldn't action. She had to watch. She had to...''' '''"Can...dace..." Phineas said with the vague voice he had.''' '''"Save him!" The voice was yelling in Candace's mind. "Your master is just a piece of non-matter. It's your brother there!" That voice was killing the teenager. She felt like covering her head, as the happy memories with her brother flooded across her deep blue eyes.'' '''"Let him go, you creep!" she shouted.''' Heinz was surprised by his minion's reaction. '''"What?" he asked.''' '''Courage. Doing the right thing, ignoring everyone around. "Do it!" That voice yelled in the girl's mind.''' '''"Let him go!" she yelled, kicking him in the face.''' "Justice callin'. Tyranny fallin'" Candace thought with a smile. She grabbed her brother and ran away. The fading screams of him died into the darkness. Now, the girl understood what she was meant to be: a hero.''' I told you I'm writing a mingled non-sense. Also, Triangle is nice.