User blog comment:FossilsDaDaDa/Sneak Peek at my Next Story/@comment-5151799-20110813201833

I have competition. :P

Oh, and I noticed a small error: "who’s face could not be seen through the cracks." That should be "whose face couldn't be seen through the crack. The way you worded it, it would be "who is face", as if to ask who Face is, which doesn't make sense, as Face is not a person but a section of the head, and -- Maybe I'm looking too much into this.

Overall, nice excerpt.