User blog comment:PlantyThePottedPlant/Random Topic Blogging II: Electric Blogaloo/@comment-4005481-20120327161602/@comment-4005481-20120327234346

Ta-da! http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17708/Abandoned

I got a lot of helpful advice, and found out I need to work on not rushing my stories. Yaaaay!