User blog comment:Peanutjon/I Do Reviews/@comment-3006892-20120104233158/@comment-6838530-20120106061719

Whati-If-O-Matic

 * Plot Line: O - This is an interesting plot. I wish there were more that shows Candace hating Ferb. She just got the last straw. Where's the first straw? It could be a lot better.
 * Characters: E - Candace is very in character. However, Phineas seems to be more of a creative genius then Ferb, which is kinda incorrect. Jessie was in character. Ferb talked...too much. He wasn't in character much. And I'm not sure who the holographic person was, so I can't tell you that part. It was excellent, but not awesome.
 * Cast: E - The cast worked, except the holographic person. Still don't know who she was so I can't really help you with that. Other then that: Yay!
 * Grammer: A - Yes, A! The only incorrect grammer was holographic person, but it's supposed to be like that, so, WOOT!
 * Language: A - Uh huh, uh huh, uh huh! This is a great story.
 * Overall: E - This is a great story with minor help needed. You can make it greater in a little amount of time!