User blog comment:Peanutjon/I Do Reviews/@comment-4005481-20120104152112/@comment-6838530-20120105034051

Abandoned

 * Plot Line: A - I loved this plot. Very nice story for the character, which included a nice backstory. This was very emotional and I almost wanted to cry.
 * Characters: E - It was nice, sorta. Most of the characters acted great. But Phineas was kinda...weird. And I'm not entirely sure what Candace was doing helping on the ferris wheel...
 * Cast: E - Everything worked, except for above. What was Candace doing there? Seriously. Couldn't it have been Isabella?
 * Grammer: A - I didn't notice a single typo. It was awesome.
 * Language: A - Not one bad word! It was awesome!
 * Overall: E - This was very excellent. I loved it and I hope to read it again and again.