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And here's the very first version of the prologue as a sneak:

In another dimension beyond our own, the Tri-State Area was conquered by a cruel man named Heinz Doofenshmirtz. He now rules with an iron fist, and shows no compassion or mercy towards anyone. Many homes were destroyed, and many people vanished after he took over. Most of the missing ones are parents, which left groups of stranded kids to form groups to oppose Heinz's rule. The one that we shall be focusing on is a small but strong group in the city of Danville known as The Resistance. Their leader is only 17 years old, but is an excellent leader. His name is Alem Jones. The characters that we shall soon bring our attention to, however, are two young boys known as Phineas and Ferb. They are not just step-brothers, but best friends as well. As you read on, you shall see how different they are from the Phineas and Ferb that we know. Our story shall begin now, starting with a terrible tragedy that made everything worse than it already is...

Anything I should change?